@chadhamlet The changes all look a lot better and the SEO has updated nicely. Your friends are right, the text is getting cut off, but that should be an easy fix. If you’re feeling brave, you could learn code to hide/show text, like on my page here: [https://www.notenoughknife.com/theteam]((https://www.notenoughknife.com/theteam)
Going forwards it’s always about refinement. Always ask yourself if you need a specific element on your site, simplicity is usually the best answer. Anyways I’m glad I could help! I’m always here if you want any feedback/tips in the future.
Best,
Matt